Saturday, September 12, 2015

Week 9 blog post

                        In the weekends. 


In the weekends on Saturday my dad was working well all of the girls my sister my mum and I place a boy my brother we were in the house we were so bord but then I told my mum if we can go to the park to have fun my mum said is we can but can we go to the mall first so I can bay a gaft for my frends new baby OK I replyd  so we got redy to go then when we got there it toke as 10 minets to find as a parking then at last we fond a parking we went in the mall and went in the flower shop the flower shop did not only have flowers it even had tedy bears and all kind of stafe but my mum pecked this one I was so happy that we pecked this one because I 
liked it as well after we bayed it we went to home so the present dids not get rouend the we went to the park today was fun I said we played and played we had so mach fun and that was the end of ouer day.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2015 at 2:48 PM

    To Sadeen
    You have really improved on your spelling.
    What did you go on in the park?
    I liked that you added a really cute picture.
    From Jasmine

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2015 at 4:04 AM

    Hi Sadeen
    Very cure picture of the gift! Do you think the baby will like it? What day of the week was the car park so full at the mall? People should do a lot more of playing in the park than going shopping so that it isn't so busy all the time. Check where you think a sentence should end and put a full stop there and capital letter. Let me know what you did this weekend too.

    Ms W.

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