Why I thought of doing a animal for my character is becuse I get more ideas. What my character is, my character is a rat it's a demand. Why I did a rat for my character because in some movies rats are always evil and I wanted to make my character evil.
I liked how you layed out youe writing. You organised it to step 1 and step 2 etc. I loved your picture of your character and your description. Next time, probably describe more of your character to hook in your readers. I can't wait to read your story no matter how long it is.
Great job sadeen your character does look evil just check on your spelling mistake on demon but everything else was great :)
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you layed out youe writing. You organised it to step 1 and step 2 etc. I loved your picture of your character and your description. Next time, probably describe more of your character to hook in your readers. I can't wait to read your story no matter how long it is.
Jasmine